what is it like living a life with eyes
that are bigger than your heart
and helicopter wings flying
in tandem with your mate
such a strange take on love
Writing 201:Poetry Assignment 4
Prompt: Animal, Form: Concrete Poetry, Device: Enjambment
© 2015 DM Shepherd
Roaming at Large 
This made me smile!
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This is great!
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Every letter makes its mark – just as every tiny creature adds its own beauty to the world.
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Really well done — I’m sure there was a lot of work that went into this, yet the result feels effortless and light, like the animal it refers to.
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Wow, thanks!
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Aww, this is beautiful! At first, I thought the image was the rays of the sun 😀
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Great work. Loved the words especially. You melded form and content very well.
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great!
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You really cracked it! Love it both ways, word and image. Perfect.
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This is gorgeous! I totally appreciate the imagery, both your words (“helicopter wings flying”) and the lines as a dragonfly.
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